Front cover: I really love the front cover image as I think it is of really good quality and really suits the genre that you have chosen to do. The only thing I could suggest to improve it would be made the writing at the very top more defined.
Double page spread: Again I really like the images especially how you have got a strip of three on the right hand side it really looks good. I know it not yet complete so with text I think it will make the page better.
Contents Page: I really like how you have kept the same colour scheme as the front cover but I think it needs either more images or text to fill the blank space.
So overall I really like your magazine so far :) x
Front Page: I think the front pages is really good I think the image really dominants the page and makes it stereotypical to a rock magazine. I really like the font used I just think the red should be a bit lighter because I don't feel it stands out.
Contents pages: I really like the red blood stain on the oages i think it looks really awesome, I also like the order of your page numbers and how you have put them into categories.I think that the pictures could be a little bigger and more spread out but I can see its a working progress
Two page spread: I think the pictures on the contents page are good they are really well taken.
Overall: I think it really does portray Rock and I really like it :)
I like your front cover and the model suits the genre. I think you should change the exclusive part at the top to another colour as you can not see it that well. I like how the masthead colour matches the models outfit. I like the pictures on the double page spread as they are strong poses and I like the 3 pictures at the side of the main photo. I also like how you have carried the colours onto the content and double page spread. Overall I like you magazine, I hope this helps. :)
Front cover:
ReplyDeleteI really love the front cover image as I think it is of really good quality and really suits the genre that you have chosen to do. The only thing I could suggest to improve it would be made the writing at the very top more defined.
Double page spread:
Again I really like the images especially how you have got a strip of three on the right hand side it really looks good. I know it not yet complete so with text I think it will make the page better.
Contents Page:
I really like how you have kept the same colour scheme as the front cover but I think it needs either more images or text to fill the blank space.
So overall I really like your magazine so far :) x
Front Page:
ReplyDeleteI think the front pages is really good I think the image really dominants the page and makes it stereotypical to a rock magazine. I really like the font used I just think the red should be a bit lighter because I don't feel it stands out.
Contents pages:
I really like the red blood stain on the oages i think it looks really awesome, I also like the order of your page numbers and how you have put them into categories.I think that the pictures could be a little bigger and more spread out but I can see its a working progress
Two page spread:
I think the pictures on the contents page are good they are really well taken.
Overall:
I think it really does portray Rock and I really like it :)
I like your front cover and the model suits the genre. I think you should change the exclusive part at the top to another colour as you can not see it that well. I like how the masthead colour matches the models outfit. I like the pictures on the double page spread as they are strong poses and I like the 3 pictures at the side of the main photo. I also like how you have carried the colours onto the content and double page spread. Overall I like you magazine, I hope this helps. :)
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